Monday, July 18, 2005

Rain

Smell of earth; Teasing, tantalising;
Grey day, green grass, outlines blurring;

Orange streetlights; darkened daytime;
Anticipation runs subtly sublime;

Tender trickles, down the face;
Droplets rest, the lips are glaced.

Silence broken; rhythmn permeating;
Steady beats reverberating;

Frenzied showers, sting and soothe;
No colour of rain; Mere blinded hues;

Drums of thunder roll on by
Lightning breaks an even sky

The moment passes, sensations cease;
Touched, imbued, cleansed, released.

10 Comments:

Blogger sameer said...

really nice picture once again!

7/18/2005 9:59 PM  
Blogger Lorena said...

beautiful. i really liked reading this. i'm glad you paid me a visit so that i was able to find you :)

i like your blog. can't wait to visit more often.

7/19/2005 3:56 AM  
Blogger Heh Heh said...

Bombay?

7/19/2005 11:37 AM  
Blogger . : A : . said...

Nice poem and pic. Have recently shot a series of these types of pics. Think I will put them up soon.

7/20/2005 5:23 AM  
Blogger Itineranting said...

Thanks Kafka!
Lorena, Palmer - welcome and thank you. Hope to see you often!
FG, snapshot - HK. Words - Bombay..
A, put 'em up soon..must tell you, I have a couple of shots like yours of July 13.

7/22/2005 7:35 PM  
Blogger . : A : . said...

And I look forward to seeing those!

:-)

7/24/2005 6:58 AM  
Blogger thinkpad_84 said...

rain symbolizes freedom for me...there is an entry on my blog called "freedom"...thought u'd like reading it :-)

7/25/2005 3:52 PM  
Blogger Renee Wagemans said...

What a deep deep photo this is I get lost in it. Very beautiful poem too

Renee

7/27/2005 3:00 AM  
Blogger Itineranting said...

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8/01/2005 12:23 PM  
Blogger Itineranting said...

Think Pad - welcome & thanks for dropping by. Yes, your post was wonderfully reminiscent of so many thoughts that go with rain..only, those thoughts stand dangerously thwarted given what we'r goin through in bbay right now..

Renee - thank you & so glad you visited. Please do drop by again.

8/01/2005 4:27 PM  

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